Lupa
Center Wolf
Lupa--Center Wolf of Lupa's Pack
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Post by Lupa on Jan 19, 2007 2:13:17 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]A lone she-wolf stands on her rocky perch. Her empty island lies silent before she tips her muzzle back and lets loose an echoing cry. The howl rebounds off the rocks, and she would be surprise if she heard an answer. Can anyone hear me? She looks up at the moon and her almost-glowing green eyes seem so sad at the moment of her final thoughts as she cuts of the howl.[/glow]
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Chill
Tendril Wolf
Chill--Tendril Wolf of the Glacier and Representative of the Web of Ice.
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Post by Chill on Jan 19, 2007 19:17:46 GMT -5
Oh, no, Lupa. Learn grammar, punctuation, and spelling soon or I will go insane.
Let me correct some things for you.
This is how you would CORRECTLY type that paragraph:
A lone she-wolf stands on her rocky perch. Her empty island lies silent before she tips her muzzle back and lets loose an echoing cry. The howl rebounds off the rocks, and she would be surprise if she heard an answer. Can anyone hear me? She looks up at the moon (mooncenter is a time, not a part of the moon) and her almost-glowing green eyes seem so sad at the moment of her final thoughts as she cuts of the howl.
See? Please try to reform your posts.
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