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Post by wolffire on Dec 24, 2006 16:53:41 GMT -5
Mirra padded though the forest her path zigzagging between trees. A growl was under her breath even though she was actually in a good mood. She lightly sniffed the air making sure no one that wasn't supose to be there was. Mirra was glad to only find the scent of dirt and tree's.
Her steps were light and even though she wasn't hunting she made sure to not step on any twig that could make noise. She slowed to a stop looking around the forest, Mirra watched a small raven fly out of sight and she sat down trying to think of something to occupy her time. [/i]
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Canybis Rex (Nybis)
Center Wolf
Canybis Rex--Center Wolf of Nybis's Pack
my wolf is more of a hippie than your wolf! ♥
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Post by Canybis Rex (Nybis) on Dec 24, 2006 17:11:38 GMT -5
ooc| So they haven't met, riiiiiight?
ic| Canybis Rex sniffed the air. In the cold moon, when all the leaves were gone and animals scarce, it was much easier to smell changes in his lands, and approaching wolves. He caught a scent and followed it. It led him from the iced over shore to the forests in the heart of his lands. Catching the scent again on a soft breeze, he navigated easily through the bare forest trees.
Cold moons made everything easier. Well, except fishing. Nybis' muzzle dropped, remembering that he couldn't exactly fish very well if the waters were frozen over. Other than that, though, cold moons were great.
The scent he had followed led him to the region where a sleek black female was sitting. Nybis wondered if she might a loner, and thus a potential pack member. Walking around to face her, Nybis said in his usual kindly tone, "Hello there. I'm the owner of these lands. Who might you be?"
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Post by wolffire on Dec 24, 2006 18:48:20 GMT -5
((Yah, lets say her and her parents met him when she was younger)) Mirra looked over at him glaring without meaning to and she noticed his voice was kind [green]"I might be Mirra. I might have met you a long time ago."[/green] her voice didn't have a growl in it like it usually did, she was attempting to be nice even though he was a center wolf. She didn't show submissiveness to him but did give him a small nod 'hello'.
Mirra vaguely remembered him and didn't expect at all for him to remember her. She shuffled a little still sitting down and didn't move her eyes from him, she wasn't challenging him but she was saying she wasn't going to run around with her tail between her legs. She stood normaly knowing even if he did decide to get angery and attack that she was big for a female and was the size of an average male.
But Mirra also knew that her scares would make him second guess himself if he wanted to attack her. Mirra shook her head dropping the thoughts of the possibilty of him attacking her, she could see he wouldn't do that unless she gave him a reason to and she didn't really want to give him a reason to considering she wanted to stay. [/i]
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Canybis Rex (Nybis)
Center Wolf
Canybis Rex--Center Wolf of Nybis's Pack
my wolf is more of a hippie than your wolf! ♥
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Post by Canybis Rex (Nybis) on Dec 24, 2006 21:43:21 GMT -5
ooc| Okay sounds good!
ic| Might have met him a long time ago? Canybis Rex streached his memory as far back as possible, and found only vague recollections of his past. She did have an air of familiarity about her though, Nybis made a mental note to remember this, and try to remember where he could have met her before.
"Well then, hello Mirra, and unless I have met you before, my name is Canybis." His green eyes briefly scanned her over. She was slightly larger than average and had many ... scars? His eye immediately widened at the sight of them, but then softened again.
So, what was she doing here? Nybis hoped that she wanted to join up with a pack, and was not just passing through. Owning a whole bunch of land is cool and all, but not very much fun without a friend. The center wolf was still very much a pup at heart. Inquisitively, he asked, "And, what brings you to ... here?"
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Post by wolffire on Dec 24, 2006 22:27:17 GMT -5
Mirra smirked slightly seeing his eyes widen slightly knowing he saw her scars. She thought about explaining it but quickly dropped the idea, she decided he would ask if he wanted to know. Also whenever she did happen to tell him he might have a few more reasons to drive her away.
Mirra nodded letting her smirk fade from her face [green]"I want to join your pack."[/green] She said curtly wondering what his reaction to her request would be. Unlike in the place she had come from this time she didn't want to take over a pack, the area didn't even smell like the pack had really started yet. Also later she could find a way to lead a pack, but first she had to learn about the area and then find a mate, but to learn about the area she would have to join his pack.
Mirra stood up uncomfertable from sitting so long. At the moment she had no thoughts in her head. She was just waiting for him to answer and she had no clue what she would do after she had his answer, if it was either yes or no. She sat back down waiting patiently. [/i]
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Canybis Rex (Nybis)
Center Wolf
Canybis Rex--Center Wolf of Nybis's Pack
my wolf is more of a hippie than your wolf! ♥
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Post by Canybis Rex (Nybis) on Dec 25, 2006 8:04:15 GMT -5
ooc| Merry Christmas!
ic| Canybis Rex was happy that Mirra wanted to join his pack , which now consisited of all of two wolves. Eh. What did he expect. His pack would have to build slowly. "Sure, you may join my pack." His muzzle twitched into a smile. "Let's see. Basically my lands are most of the forest, the shallow part of the Palthar Strait, and the open lands and beaches in between. But you are allowed to go anywhere on the island for now, since there aren't any other wolves around that I know of, except for where the island narrows into an isthmus, I believe there's another pack over there. I haven't tried to talk to them yet, so I don't know what they're like."
He ended his welcoming speech and looked over at Mirra. Nybis hoped this would be the first of many wolves to come, because two wolves isn't really a pack. Perhaps three can be called a pack, but not two. Two was so ... little.
Regardless, he stood up straighter and sent his attention back to Mirra, and what was happening now. Spacing out was not a very good impression. Hopefully, she would think he was just thinking very hard or something.
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Post by wolffire on Dec 25, 2006 15:25:49 GMT -5
((Merry Christmas to!)) Mirra nodded as he spoke, listening so she would remember later. She was glad to be in the pack; it might have been very small, but it was better than nothing. She stood up as he finished speaking and put her nose in the air after wetting it with her tongue. As a breeze blew past her, Mirra sniffed the air, catching the faint but fresh scent of prey; it was too small for her to know what it was but she knew it was probably less than a mile away.
She looked over at him her nose no longer in the air [green]"Hunt?" [/b][/green] she offered, her voice back to normal, with only a small growl in it. Mirra looked towards where the scent of prey had come from, which happened to be sunsetwards. She took a few steps towards it and looked back over at him, waiting.[/center][/i]
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Chill
Tendril Wolf
Chill--Tendril Wolf of the Glacier and Representative of the Web of Ice.
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Post by Chill on Dec 25, 2006 17:40:46 GMT -5
OOC: Listen, Mirra, I'm sorry to have to do this, but: LEARN SOME GRAMMAR AND SPELLING! I don't mean that in an unfriendly way. I mean it in an it-totally-bothers-me way. Now, I can understand the occasional type-o or forgotten comma, but the constant misuse of sentence structure in your posts has really gotten to me. Just to show you where commas might be needed, if you choose to take my advice in reading this, let's look at your last post. Now, there needs to be a comma after 'spoke' because it could be a separate sentence on its own. Otherwise, it's confusing. It sounds like Nybis is speak-listening, and I don't know about you, but I'm not too sure what speak-listening is. In this sentence, I have replaced your comma with a semicolon. I did this because the two statements are separate sentences that cannot be separated by a mere comma. Also, in this sentence, there must be a comma after 'small.' Here, there were two incorrectly spelled words. It also appears awkward; a run-on, if you will. I might have made it into two separate sentences. Whoa. Very awkward. You definitely need to add commas. Try saying the sentence, either out loud or in your head. Wherever you have a slight pause, there should be a comma. Before your wolf speaks, there may be either a comma or a period, depending on, basically, which one sounds better. After speaking, you do not need to have a capital letter. Just a small comma set-off here. I hope this helps a bit. Don't let my corrections scare you off; if you like, if I catch any more grammar mistakes, I can fix them in your post for you. Don't worry about me deleting your account or anything rash like that just because of comma misuses--I never would. I like the fact that you have been roleplaying actively, and I would never want to lose a treasured member!
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Post by wolffire on Dec 25, 2006 17:47:51 GMT -5
((Thankyou, I'll try to be better about that, I have never been very good at spelling or grammar. From now on I'll write it in a Microsoft Word doc. and then have it fix the mistakes, then I'll copy and paste it. )
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Chill
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Chill--Tendril Wolf of the Glacier and Representative of the Web of Ice.
The Amazing Admin!
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Post by Chill on Dec 26, 2006 7:08:14 GMT -5
OOC: Yeah, that might be a good idea. If you have a Google toolbar, it can find any spelling mistakes for you, so that could be a good idea.
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Post by wolffire on Dec 26, 2006 14:34:52 GMT -5
((k, I just noticed the spelling thing, thanks for pointing it out )
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Canybis Rex (Nybis)
Center Wolf
Canybis Rex--Center Wolf of Nybis's Pack
my wolf is more of a hippie than your wolf! ♥
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Post by Canybis Rex (Nybis) on Dec 28, 2006 8:32:53 GMT -5
ooc| Sorry it's late! I've been really busy with my new pet frog! And of course, I always get the oddly intelligent pets who can not only escape from their cages, but also crawl back in when i'm coming so they don't get in trouble. My pets are crazy/amazing.
ic| Nybis didn't like hunting as much as fishing, but he was good at it. Plus, it would be good to help out the 'pack' with a hunt. So when Mirra asked, of course Nybis said, "Sure." He took the time to smell the air for prey, noticing a scent coming from sunsetwards. It was kind of close, close enough so that Nybis could smell it, but his smelling was pretty good, so 'close' wasn't saying much.
While Nybis was pondering the meaning of 'close' in this circumstance, Mirra had gotten ahead of him, moving towards the scent. When she looked back at him and waited, Nybis brushed all thoughts of grammar from his head, and walked along with her. Hunting was all about instincts and cleverness, not thinking. That was probably why Nybis prefered to fish. Fishing required slightly more thought. Regardless, Nybis was ready to hunt.
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Post by ameratsu on Dec 28, 2006 23:45:03 GMT -5
Ameratsu padded quietly along the moist banks of the beach, thinking.. I'm tired, I'm irritable, and I don't know why I decided to come here, but I hope this crap works out..
Ameratsu puffed out her chest irritably and growled softly to herself while she mumbled. " I hope there's something in my way, I just HOPE! I just want to BITE something! Startled by her violent outburst, she sniffed solemnly and continued to simmer as she trekked along the shoreline, hoping to find another soul. Ammy sighed and stared at the sky for a heartbeat, then howled a long note, announcing her arrival. It was now Centerset.
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Canybis Rex (Nybis)
Center Wolf
Canybis Rex--Center Wolf of Nybis's Pack
my wolf is more of a hippie than your wolf! ♥
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Post by Canybis Rex (Nybis) on Dec 30, 2006 13:09:43 GMT -5
ooc| Hi Ammy! I see your post and all, but I want Mirra to reply first whenever she gets on again... Anyway, yay! Thanks for being an Akhal wolf!
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Raksha
Center Wolf
Raksha--Center Wolf in Raksha's Pack
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Post by Raksha on Dec 31, 2006 15:47:23 GMT -5
[ooc: Not a prob.. Mirra, post away!]
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Post by wolffire on Jan 6, 2007 3:01:40 GMT -5
sorry, I cant post for awhile, I don't have much access to a comp, sorry, I'll try to post as soon as possible
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Chill
Tendril Wolf
Chill--Tendril Wolf of the Glacier and Representative of the Web of Ice.
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Post by Chill on Jan 28, 2007 15:13:41 GMT -5
I'm sorry to say that Mirra has left the site. I won't say why for obvious reasons (members have a right to privacy) but I will say that I'm truly sorry. Every member is an important part of the StoneSayer community, and it's always a sad event to lose one.
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